27.7.05

nothing's changed

then

Lurking around always
swirling, unseen, around us
Nothing says
when the shapelessness
starts being felt
In the guise
of darkness and fear,
nebulous, lies
light and beauty
And happiness beyond,
we believe.

now

Dazed, and
confusability,
anger seeps at
inexplicability

but it seeps, does
the anger, through
helplessness, its not
steaming through

fear knocks once
prodding gently
feeding off what
I suppress, mostly

Pondering this
meaningless cruelty
of life
ha, of life?

12 thoughts:

Anonymous Wednesday, July 27, 2005  

meaningless it seems... but there is a reason for it all. one that may elude for a while... maybe even a long while... but it shall be known at some point... i guess.
am sorry for the fear and the confusability.

Penny Lane Wednesday, July 27, 2005  

There's a line from a John Lennon song that goes 'Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans'. So good luck on the pondering... :)

livinghigh Thursday, July 28, 2005  

ummm.. ok,., i commented on de other post, below this one, and o, yes, the one abt de robot moonwalk was very cute! ;-)

Mint Chutney Thursday, July 28, 2005  

wow

Anonymous Friday, July 29, 2005  

anon:...thank you:)

penny: yeah I know that one... but this was less pondering, I guess, and more spacing...

high: what are you on? :)

mint: er....thank you?
(wow god or wow "huh"?, or wow "eeow")
:)

Mint Chutney Friday, July 29, 2005  

Wow meaning good.

. Friday, July 29, 2005  

danke, madam.
though recent efforts (including this one)have been rather disappointing actually, this was just so 'me' at the time, so...

Jay Friday, July 29, 2005  

Life? Did somebody say life? Where were you when I needed a slogan for that contest, huh?

Rat Friday, July 29, 2005  

Been very poetic these days havent you vague ?? Nice :)

Anonymous Friday, July 29, 2005  

was busy being numb, jay ol chap. hence these unfulfilling dabs at writing...maybe you should have sent them a cartoon instead. made with ten strokes.

thanks, rat. Poetic? I dunno...more like...I don't know.. I just cannot get a word for it, though I must try.

. : A : . Sunday, July 31, 2005  

Ironic ending, like life?

Well written!

Anonymous Sunday, July 31, 2005  

thanks, .:a:. - I guess it seems ironic. Felt only cruel.

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