please
Its convenient to pray
for it is not an everyday
Ritual
but come the time, when
desire arises, then-
Hope
comes riding in
amidst a greedy din;
Unabashed-
asking, imploring, pleading,
anything for the searing
Pain
of disappointment, to go.
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27.2.06
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On thoughts and sighs. New places and old times. Of darkness and rhyme and whisky. Honesty and the unreal. On today and tomorrow and hope and nothing.
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thats question mark say s about as much as your name, anon...:)
not all poems are borne entirely from reality,no?
Pain
of disappointment
....how many would have prayed without that.....
asking, imploring, pleading,
anything for the searing
If I may suggest something? Work on these two. It was really good till then, but this lack of rhyme pulls it down. Hope you don't mind me saying it though.
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