27.2.06

please

Its convenient to pray
for it is not an everyday
Ritual
but come the time, when
desire arises, then-
Hope
comes riding in
amidst a greedy din;
Unabashed-
asking, imploring, pleading,
anything for the searing
Pain
of disappointment, to go.

5 thoughts:

Anonymous Monday, February 27, 2006  

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vAgue Monday, February 27, 2006  

thats question mark say s about as much as your name, anon...:)
not all poems are borne entirely from reality,no?

shooting star Monday, March 13, 2006  

Pain
of disappointment
....how many would have prayed without that.....

Sue Wednesday, March 22, 2006  

asking, imploring, pleading,
anything for the searing


If I may suggest something? Work on these two. It was really good till then, but this lack of rhyme pulls it down. Hope you don't mind me saying it though.

Ronan Jimson Monday, July 17, 2006  

Great Work!!!
this is a good link you can refer Art Collection

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